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Re: Typesetter Test

Post by Anna-Mary on Sun Feb 13, 2011 4:17 pm

yang test ketiga (dua-duanya nih):
pemotongan kalimat di panel tiga masih bisa lebih bagus.
panel keempat, insert teks pertama, yg baris terakhir kok jaraknya agak lebih jauh daripada yg atas?
panel keempat, bubble satu, teks kurang turun.
Panel terakhir, bubble satu, teks kurang tengah.
Panel terakhir, bubble dua, pemotongan kalimat masih kurang baik.

test satu:
panel keempat, teks kurang turun.
panel kelima bubble satu, teks terlalu kecil dan pemotongan kalimat bisa lebih bagus.
panel kelima bubble dua, kurang ke kiri dikit.... mungkin?

test dua:
panel satu bubble terakhir, kurang tengah
panel dua bubble terakhir, kurang tengah

whoa, capek juga komen sebanyak ini.... /plak Razz

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Post by Gwilthyunman on Sun Feb 13, 2011 4:44 pm

Ranze, liat komen Ann dan aku cuma tambahin bbrp aja~~

Test kesatu:
- Panel keempat, pemotongan dikata "perhatiannya" bisa dibuat lebih bagus.
- Panel kelima bubble pertama, pemotongan kalimatnya jelek, perhatikan bentuk!
- Panel kelima bubble kedua, iya, seperti kata Ann, kurang kekiri dikit.

Test kedua:
- Panel pertama bubble kedua dan keempat, kurang turun dikit.
- Panel pertama bubble kelima, pemotongan kata kurang bagus.

- Panel kedua bubble kesatu, kurang kekiri dikit.
- Panel kedua bubble ketiga, fontnya besarin dikit dan sebenarnya pemotongannya bisa diperbagus.

- Panel keempat, redraw perlu dilatih nih~~

- Panel kelima, kurang kebawah dikit dan font besarin dikit.

Test ketiga:
- Panel ketiga bubble pertama, tulisan jangan di-Italic (dan aku lebih suka yang pertama, daripada yang versi kedua).
- Panel ketiga, teks diluar bubble stroke sizenya terlalu tebal, usahakan sizenya max 3.

- Panel keempat, teks diluar bubble yang pertama, kok jeda antara teks "akrab dengan" dan "Fuji-kun..." rada jauh?
- Panel keempat bubble pertama, kurang turun dikit.

- Panel keenam, pakai Italic kalau teksnya bukan percakapan.

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Re: Typesetter Test

Post by yuuki-hime on Sun Feb 13, 2011 5:44 pm

weeww tes kedua udah dibabat ma Ann beserta gwilth,
biar pengalamnmu banyak, coba bandingin dgn TS manga lain~
biar tahu gmn salahnya sbelum dipostin Wink
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Re: Typesetter Test

Post by Gwilthyunman on Sun Feb 13, 2011 6:08 pm

Ah iya~~ ranze, minta PSD filemu yang test ke-2 donkz...

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Re: Typesetter Test

Post by TheHangedMan on Sun Feb 13, 2011 7:46 pm

Komentar dibabat habis semua. Razz
Nambahin: Redrawmu masih keliatan tuh.
tes 2: hati2 sama yang titik/berpixel kayak begitu. pastiin ada jeda yang kurang lebih sama kayak yang lainnya.
tes 3: redraw di rambut masih keliatan. coba pakai pen tool.
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Re: Typesetter Test

Post by anko kakashi on Sun Feb 13, 2011 8:41 pm

saya kembali!*bawa-bawa hasil typeset*.


yang pertama:
Spoiler:

yang kedua:
Spoiler:

ketiganya:
Spoiler:


err... saya pakai dirty finger... kejauhan tidak barisnya? tapi saya normal enternya+copy pastenya... Smile
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Re: Typesetter Test

Post by yuuki-hime on Sun Feb 13, 2011 9:45 pm

pertamax komen XD Razz
menurut saya sih ~

Di pg.1, panel 5, pemotongan teksnya diperbagusin lgi Wink
Usahain klu batin/mikir pke wild word italic, soalnya itu sih
kata gwilth.

Di pg.2, panel 1, bubble 3 kanan, teks krg ketengah
Panel 2 bubble 1 ma 3, diperbagusin jg pemotongannya Wink

Di pg.3, panel 3, teks krg ketengah Wink
Itu aja saranku~

Tambahan, juga klu redraw jgn berlebihan burn tool.
Selanjutnya tnggu yg lain~

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Re: Typesetter Test

Post by Anna-Mary on Sun Feb 13, 2011 9:59 pm

@yuuki: kalau insert text, boleh selain Wild Words Italic kok. Kalau rajin ya ganti2 Razz

Page 1, panel pertama, pemotongan kalimat kurang enak.
panel terakhir bubble satu, kurang atas.

Page 2, panel kedua, bubble terakhir, 'Ashitaba-chan' mungkin bisa dipenggal, 'chan' di bawah?
panel ketiga, redraw masih keliatan.
panel empat, whuah, redraw.nya bagus!
panel terakhir, bubble satu, kurang tengah.

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Re: Typesetter Test

Post by ranze20 on Sun Feb 13, 2011 10:06 pm

Gwilthyunman wrote:Ah iya~~ ranze, minta PSD filemu yang test ke-2 donkz...

gimana cara kirimnya file psd??hehehe nubi abis dah aku....g tau carany.. hohoho
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Re: Typesetter Test

Post by mosaicguard on Sun Feb 13, 2011 10:57 pm

ya upload...ntr kasi linkx ke gwilth, via PM...
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Re: Typesetter Test

Post by Michaeru on Mon Feb 14, 2011 2:11 am

halaman 1
Spoiler:

halaman 2
Spoiler:

halaman3
Spoiler:

ngerjain sambil maklum da tengah malam ... hohohoho
mohn kritik dan saran kakak'' master ....
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Re: Typesetter Test

Post by Gwilthyunman on Mon Feb 14, 2011 7:09 am

Untuk Anko: (tambahan)
Picture pertama:
- Panel 2, kata "...Bahwa" seharusnya ditulis "...bahwa".

Picture kedua:
- Redrawnya udah lumayan, tp musti sering dilatih lagi.

Anko, overall, hasilmu ini udah bagus sih, lebih bagus dari test2mu sebelumnya! Keep up the good work! ^^

Untuk eRu:
Picture pertama:
- Panel 4-5, tulisan terlalu kecil

Picture kedua:
- Beberapa kata letaknya ga ditengah
- Kalau lagi teriak, gunakan Wild Words BoldItalic
- Redraw musti dilatih lagi

Picture ketiga:
- Pemotongan kata kurang bagus

Untuk detailnya, tunggu komen dari Ann-chan atau yuuki ya, eRu Razz Aku sibuk, makanya cmn kasi overallnya doankz XD

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Re: Typesetter Test

Post by mosaicguard on Mon Feb 14, 2011 7:12 am

klo pendapat sy sih, redraw ud bgs tp perlu dilatih lg biar lbh bgs...

Trs dr sudut pandang org awam, yg g enak diliat tuh test ke 3 panel 6, bubble 2, susunan kata2x kurang bgs...THX
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Re: Typesetter Test

Post by Gwilthyunman on Mon Feb 14, 2011 8:43 am

Untuk ranze, baca Typesetting Tutorial dan Typesetting Tutorial #2! Kalau mau masukin teks, bikin teks box dulu, jng cuma lsg klik aja~~ baca tutorial untuk lebih jelaznya Wink

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Post by yuuki-hime on Mon Feb 14, 2011 10:05 am

akhir2 ini bnyk ya yang tes typeset... Nervous
klu Michaeru emang nubie photoshop hslmu lumayan bagus lho Wink
cuma sih~ (maap ngga detail ==')
1. Kebanyakan kayaknya menurut saya sih, di pg.1 km kebalik ngasih batin/mikir mah
pke italic, trus di pg. dua jg klu pke bold italic di strong ya Wink
2. Size teks usahain pasin dgn bntuk bubble, trus jg distrong
3. Pemotongan kata diperbagusin jg Wink
4. Di pg.3 panel 3 ma 4 jg lebih baik pke wild word roman.

Ya hanya itu saranku~
Tetep berusaha buat semuanya ... ^^
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Re: Typesetter Test

Post by Gwilthyunman on Mon Feb 14, 2011 10:25 am

Anko, selamat, kamu udah aku jadiin Typesetter juga Wink
Kamu jadi Typesetter untuk Project Liar Game yah Question

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Post by TheHangedMan on Mon Feb 14, 2011 10:29 am

Selamat, anko Wink
Mau kerja bareng aku? Tenang, aku ga gigit Razz
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Post by Anna-Mary on Mon Feb 14, 2011 1:16 pm

Nervous saya lagi terserang penyakit malas, jadi secara overall aja ya, walaupun mungkin hampir sama dengan Gwilth.

Page1: panel bawah tulisannya terlalu kecil. Pas masukin teks, kamu perhitungkan juga apakah teks bisa dibaca dengan enak atau tidak, karena pekerjaan kita di sini adalah memberi yg terbaik utk para pembaca Wink
Panel3 juga pemotongan kalimat kurang bagus.

Page2: kebanyakan belum tepat di tengah. memang sulit sih buat ngepasinnya. tapi kalau saya, biasanya saya jauhkan pandangan dari gmbar, maka akan lebih kelihatan udah tengah atau belum Wink kayak orang yg rabun deket gitu deh jadinya

Page3: panel tiga dan terakhir, pemotongan kalimat kurang bagus.


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Re: Typesetter Test

Post by Michaeru on Mon Feb 14, 2011 1:30 pm

@ all _ thanks 4 kritik en saran na....

eru kan coba lagi test na ,.. (tp mu offline 2 hari dulu yaa, mu kluar)
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@anko _ selamat yaaaa
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Post by Anna-Mary on Mon Feb 14, 2011 1:35 pm

Oh iya, selamat juga bagi Anko!
Wah wah, baru masuk udah dapet Multijob! Hebat! Onion Head Emoticons

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Post by ranze20 on Mon Feb 14, 2011 2:32 pm

Selamat but anko.. Arrow Arrow Arrow maju terus.. saia masih jauh dari bisa
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Re: Typesetter Test

Post by anko kakashi on Tue Feb 15, 2011 11:06 am

@yuuki: arigatou sarannya... oh ya saya malah nggak pakai burn tool, cuma menghitamkan pakai crush tool biasa shishishi.


@ann: arigatou ne... oh ya selamat berjuang untuk scanlator testnya Smile


@gwilth: oke, saya akan rajin berlatih...shishishi. arigatou....


@THM: shishishi... mohon bantuannya



@eru+ranze: shishishi arigatou... waah nggak begitu kok... kamu pasti bisa Smile
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Re: Typesetter Test

Post by kuroneko on Tue Feb 15, 2011 8:27 pm

rus mulai dri mna ya? cink da ps.07 ni

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Post by Gwilthyunman on Tue Feb 15, 2011 9:39 pm

kuroneko wrote:rus mulai dri mna ya? cink da ps.07 ni
Baca tutorial kalau masi belum tau apa2, terus cb testnya di p.1 bounce

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Post by Michaeru on Wed Feb 16, 2011 6:04 am

reedit 1
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reedit 2
Spoiler:

reeedit 3
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udah baca smua tutor na buat redraw ama typeset ,.. ,.. tp masi harus bnyak latihan nii aku .... mohon bimbingan na master'' ,... Hohohoho
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