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Re: Typesetter Test

Post by nonameareavaliable on Wed Nov 30, 2011 10:37 am

hay minna-san dan juga para sesepuh cheers
diriku yang tidak sempurna ini mencoba apply jadi typesetter.

ini dia karya seninya newbie...
mohon maaf klo banyak kecacatan dan kekacauan bertebaran disana-sini
harap maklum ya....

Arrow
gambar1:

Arrow
gambar2:

Arrow
gambar3:


sangat amat teramat sangat menerima saran dan kritiknya
terimakasih
*salamin sesepuh satu2. pelukin sesama newbie satu2*
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Re: Typesetter Test

Post by AB Junior on Wed Nov 30, 2011 10:56 am

nonameareavaliable wrote:hay minna-san dan juga para sesepuh cheers
diriku yang tidak sempurna ini mencoba apply jadi typesetter.

ini dia karya seninya newbie...
mohon maaf klo banyak kecacatan dan kekacauan bertebaran disana-sini
harap maklum ya....

Arrow
gambar1:

Arrow
gambar2:

Arrow
gambar3:


sangat amat teramat sangat menerima saran dan kritiknya
terimakasih
*salamin sesepuh satu2. pelukin sesama newbie satu2*

komen dari nubie terutama masalah redraw:
Goth
  • redraw sudah agak bagus tapi untuk ukuran font di panel 4-5 agak sedikit besar dan kurang ke tengah

hoken
  • hoken 1: beberapa font agak besar dan kurang ke tengah dan juga redrawnya masih agak kasar di panel 3.. area dot masih terlihat broken

hoken 2
  • hoken 2: font agak besar di beberapa buble dan redraw atap rumahnya sedikit blur


mungkin itu saja dulu sisanya nanti nunggu master TS dari MC... saya cm komen masalah redrawnya saja dulu...
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Re: Typesetter Test

Post by Panda-san on Wed Nov 30, 2011 11:45 am

setuju sama abe

font size kadang masih terlalu besar + belom di tengah Razz
karenya ud lama ga ts jd lupa mesti kek gimana Razz
tunggu para master TS yang lain aja deh Razz
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Re: Typesetter Test

Post by Michalv on Wed Nov 30, 2011 3:20 pm

Akhirnya dari sejuta aplikan *lebay*, ada yang ngesave secara bener dan upload secara bener!

1
- Panel 3,4,5 textnya kegedean

2
- Panel 1 bubble 4 textnya kegedean
- Panel 3 ada bagian yang masih keliatan text jepangnya, terus ada yang redrawnya masih kasar juga. Yang text ke-2 itu kok gk italic?
- Panel 6 textnya kegedean

3
- Panel 3 bubble 1 textnya kegedean. Terus text ke-2 gak italic?
- Panel 4 bubble 1 textnya kegedean
- Panel 6 kalo textnya berpikir di bubble, textnya di-italic + pake warna abu-abu
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Re: Typesetter Test

Post by Anna-Mary on Wed Nov 30, 2011 4:30 pm

Saya idem dengan atas~

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Re: Typesetter Test

Post by thevile on Thu Dec 01, 2011 4:46 am

idem juga
*walau nggak ngerti TS
lol!
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Re: Typesetter Test

Post by nonameareavaliable on Mon Dec 05, 2011 10:17 am

kritik dan saran anda kami tampung
oke, akan kukerjakan ulang...
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Re: Typesetter Test

Post by ilovelidya on Wed Dec 07, 2011 6:00 pm

Ah gomene, baru bisa kembali sekarang..
ini sudah saya edit >.<

GOTH:



Hoken Page 19:



Hoken page 30:



maaf lama banget >.<
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Re: Typesetter Test

Post by Anna-Mary on Thu Dec 08, 2011 5:18 am

GOTH:
Panel 1 dan 2, teksnya masih kekecilan menurut saya.
Panel terakhir agak kurang tengah.

Hoken p.19:
Suda bagus :D

Hoken p.30:
Insert teks pertama letaknya agak terlalu turun, jadi agak susah dibaca.
Selain itu udah bagus! :D

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Re: Typesetter Test

Post by AB Junior on Thu Dec 08, 2011 12:03 pm

idem dengan Ann-chan ^^
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Re: Typesetter Test

Post by ilovelidya on Thu Dec 08, 2011 11:45 pm

makasih ya kritiknya... hehe ini udah aku edit lagi..

GOTHS:



Hoken Page 30:



hehehe terima kasih cheers
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Re: Typesetter Test

Post by Michalv on Fri Dec 09, 2011 8:09 pm

Selamat, ilovelidya! Kamu udah jadi trainee di sini :D
Ini threadmu, ntar bakal dikasih tugas2 di sana ~ Kalo udah mulai biasa, ntar diangkat jadi typesetter tetap Smile
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Re: Typesetter Test

Post by ilham on Sun Dec 25, 2011 5:03 pm

ini sedikit hasil olahan saya
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Re: Typesetter Test

Post by Michalv on Sun Dec 25, 2011 9:17 pm

First of all, jangan double post =w=
Btw lain kali post aja SEMUA hasilnya disini, jangan PM ke aku ~

Spoiler:
Text kegedean semua, redraw di panel 2-3 klo bisa ditingkatkan.

Spoiler:
Panel 1 bubble 1 text kegedean
Panel 2 bubble 3 kurang tengah
Panel 3 bubble 1 kurang tengah
Panel 4 redrawnya bener2 digambar ulang, jangan cuma ngeclone stamp doank
Panel 5 bubble 1 gak konsisten pake fontnya. Bubble teriak yang di awal pake CC wiccan
Panel 6 bubble 1 kurang tengah
bubble 2 gak konsisten pake fontnya. Bubble teriak yang di awal pake CC wiccan. Kurang tengah

Spoiler:
Panel 3 bubble 1 textnya horizontal aja
text 1 gk diredraw, masih keliatan putih2nya. Text kegedean
Panel 4 text 1-2 gk diredraw, masih keliatan putih2nya. Text kegedean
bubble 1 text kegedean
Panel 6 bubble 1-2 textnya kegedean. Klo bubble mikir, di-italic ama pake warna font abu2
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Re: Typesetter Test

Post by Vanguards on Sun Dec 25, 2011 10:13 pm

wah besar banget teksnya, jadi ngeri bacanya Shocked
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Re: Typesetter Test

Post by ilham on Mon Dec 26, 2011 11:49 am

hasil tes yg ke 3x,


Spoiler:

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Re: Typesetter Test

Post by Michalv on Mon Dec 26, 2011 1:30 pm

Jangan double post... prasaan aku dah bilang dhe kemaren ._____. Kan bisa edit postmu.

[1]
Panel 5 bubble 1 kurang tengah

[2]
Panel 1 bubble 3 kurang tengah
Panel 3-4 redrawnya diperbagus. Putih2nya masih kliatan.

[3]
Panel 3 redrawnya diperbagus. Putih2nya masih kliatan.
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Re: Typesetter Test

Post by ilham on Mon Dec 26, 2011 4:29 pm

maklum mash newbee, Onion Head Emoticons makasih banyak kritikannya,, Smile

Michalv wrote:Jangan double post... prasaan aku dah bilang dhe kemaren ._____. Kan bisa edit postmu.

[1]
Panel 5 bubble 1 kurang tengah

[2]
Panel 1 bubble 3 kurang tengah
Panel 3-4 redrawnya diperbagus. Putih2nya masih kliatan.

[3]
Panel 3 redrawnya diperbagus. Putih2nya masih kliatan.

dah sy edit,, tolong komentnya... biar jd lebih baik lg...


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Re: Typesetter Test

Post by Vanguards on Mon Dec 26, 2011 7:36 pm

masih double post -_-

-> yg halaman ketiga

  • gak pake stroke, yg teks di luar kotak
  • ada bubble yg kosong
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Re: Typesetter Test

Post by ilham on Tue Dec 27, 2011 7:43 am

Vanguards wrote:masih double post -_-

-> yg halaman ketiga

  • gak pake stroke, yg teks di luar kotak
  • ada bubble yg kosong
maaf klw masih double post, msh blm paham btl
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Re: Typesetter Test

Post by tobi a.k.a sandy on Tue Dec 27, 2011 1:42 pm

@ilham, mas gimana rasanya jadi typesetter...
kendala apa aja yang dihadapi???
saya ingin tahu.. saya kepingin jadi typesetter.. bounce
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Re: Typesetter Test

Post by Michalv on Tue Dec 27, 2011 6:40 pm

@Tobi: Mending langsung rasain aja Razz Ambil tesnya ~
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Re: Typesetter Test

Post by ilham on Wed Dec 28, 2011 6:55 am

tobi a.k.a sandy wrote:@ilham, mas gimana rasanya jadi typesetter...
kendala apa aja yang dihadapi???
saya ingin tahu.. saya kepingin jadi typesetter.. bounce

cukup seru... awalnya aga' susah tp sy menikmatinya. kendalanya, sy baru pemula make PhotoShop jd aga' lambat dalam olah gambarnya. silahkan coba sendiri deh...


perbaikan halaman ke 3
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Re: Typesetter Test

Post by Galuh on Mon Jan 30, 2012 6:07 pm

mediafire.com i/?6o76x41df2f4xhd
ini hasil saya om,
mohon sarannya,,

Spoiler:
ini yang kedua om


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Re: Typesetter Test

Post by Vanguards on Mon Jan 30, 2012 6:10 pm

kok pas di bubble teriak, ada 2 font yg berbeda, hrs disamakan fontnya ya!
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